the guy in the middle kinda takes away from it, but it IS a comission, so it's normal.
art-wise, yoruichi's nipples are far too high and her face is a little on the sharp side. on the other hand her eyes came out perfect and her hair is just right.
Nel... well the scar on the skull is non-existent, and her breasts look flat for some reason. i know one should be, as it's against mr. comission's chest, but the other shouldn't. her eyes should also probably be a more expressive green, as opposed to the almost grey she has. her hair is unique, i like the shiny sea-foam green on her.
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